AthenAltena (athenaltena) wrote in fictionrants,
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Dear Kinoko Nasu,

I don't care how artistic you think it is, when you describe a woman's breasts as feeling like "a perfectly ripened fruit" I don't see how you expect me to not pause and laugh out loud. Totally bad timing on that one. Your sex scenes are awkward enough ("I want to smell you!" anyone?) but I think that one takes the cake as the most thought-derailing one yet.

That is all.
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